Screenplay by Timo / Fida
Produced by Evolution Pictures / Sunday To Sunday
Directed by Timo
BURGER BOY
EXT. ROADSIDE OF SHOPLOTS, 7-11 – NIGHT
SC 1 cast in scene / ERIC / WAIWOH / ANAND / CHEE /
location ROADSIDE with 7-11 / inside CAR
A small suburb, rows of shop lots, a middle age men exits a 7-11, enters a car parked outside, back seat. car door slams shut, there are 3 more middle aged men,1 Indian and 3 Chinese in total, they drove off.
ERIC
(Takes out a pack of cigarette and passes it to Waiwoh in the front passenger seat)
Here, you owe me 7.40 man.
WAIWOH
(pays Eric 10 bucks. takes the cigarette, looking O.S.)
Thanks man.
ERIC
(look out the window)
pass you the change later man...Hey, I'm hungry, wanna get something to eat?
ANAND
(started laughing)
Hahaha...
CHEE
(driving)
Oh Man! why didn't you get something just now?
WAIWOH
(looking O.S.)
You just ate la. sei fei hai a. * cantonese
ANAND
(still laughing)
Macha.. eat Burger la.. got stall in front there.
CHEE
(driving)
Where?
ANAND
(Pointing)
Ne ... There la...
CHEE
(driving)
oh.. ok. i see it..
Car pulls over at the road side, in a dodgy area in a corner of the shoplot, got a dim light. all four exits the car and walk over to the stall
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT
SC 1 A cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / ERIC / WAIWOH / ANAND / CHEE /
location ROADSIDE / STALL / CAR
The burger stall in a small suburb rows of shop houses. An unassuming average normal Malay guy with a tint of Mat Rock look. burger boy in his early 20s is at his stall busy manning his stall. His name is ZUL. The night is rather quiet but business is as usual for him. the stall has a big square umbrella. got some holes in it typical light bulb hanging from the top.
ERIC
(walk up the stall)
Boss! Burger daging special satu!
ZUL
(looking thru his stocks)
Daging habis la boss... ayam boleh?
ERIC
(Not bothered)
Boleh... bagi special lah.
OPENING CREDITS
SC OC cast in scene ZUL / HAND TALENT
location STALL
Top view of the Grill. process of the burger cooked. oil poured on the pan. a piece of meat grilled. flipped. filleted. Eggs fried, flattened. meat wrapped in the egg, mayonnaise ... etc etc...finally all wrapped up.
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT
SC 1 B cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / ERIC / WAIWOH / ANAND / CHEE /
location ROADSIDE / STALL / CAR
Ram passes Eric the wrapped burger
ZUL
(looking thru his stocks)
Tiga setengah boss..
ERIC
(looks thru his pockets.. paused and looks at waiwoh)
dude can borrow me 10 bucks ar?
WAIWOH
(looking O.S.)
what happen to the 10 bucks I just gave you? * cantonese
ERIC
(looks thru his pockets.. again)
i think i dropped it man...
ANAND
(started laughing)
hahaha...
CHEE
(standing)
Oh Man! that was just 10 munites ago
ANAND
(still laughing.. gave Eric 10 bucks)
Macha.. here... 10 bucks....
ERIC
(took it form Anand and passed it to ram)
Man..sepuluh.
ZUL
(returns change)
Thank you boss..
Eric smiles and walks over to join the guys. ram grabs his guitar and starts strumming a tune. The guys break into a silence, peer over looking at him and smile.
SC 1 C cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / ERIC / WAIWOH / ANAND / CHEE /
location STALL / CAR / GUITAR
ANAND
(looks impressed)
Eh Man, lu boleh nyanyi la bro.. not bad at all suara lu…
CHEE
(joins in the conversation)
Yea la bro … ok tu … lu punye lagu sendiri ke?
ZUL
(pause)
Boleh la…kalau mau carik makan sikit-sikit boleh jalan kot. (laughs). Lagu ni wa tulis sendiri. Ok ke?
ERIC
(standing)
Boleh punye … kena dengan suara lu ngam bro. Eh, lu tak nak masuk itu contest on TV ka? Mentor ka, boleh kasi pair lu sama dengan Mentor lu Amy Search! Pheeeewiiiittt!!!
WAIWOH
(returns change)
Wei kalau lu masuk bro, kita semua support hantar SMS vote untuk lu tau..
ANAND
(assures)
Ah.. gua pun sama support lu 100 percen..
CHEE
(joins in the conversation)
Yea Man.. 100 percent...
(Amy Search’s visual with his signature “phewwiiiiittt”. ZUL smiles as he dreams of himself getting to collaborate with his idol, Amy)
SC 1 D cast in scene AMY SEARCH
location . UNCONFIRMED
they enter car cand drove off in the fore ground... revealling ram and his stall in the back ground.
THE DREAM
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT
SC 2 cast in scene ZUL
location STALL
at his stall. ram carries on serving his patrons that arrive after eric .. here camera focus on ahmads making the burger.. while he humms his songs.. and close ups on his stall.. showing the distictive character of his stall.. posted full of snippets of magazine of amy search, led zeppelin.. nine inch nails... etc etc... his lyrics...
rain or no rain he still mans his stall
intercut in with scenes from the people and ram's Tune
THE PEOPLE. ladies ocassion 02
THE CALL
EXT. ROADSIDE, PUBLIC PHONE– NIGHT
SC 3 cast in scene ZUL
location PHONE BOOTH
(ZUL is seen at the stall. Since business is slow, he decides to make a call from a phone booth nearby. He is calling Sam at the studio)
ram walks over to the public phone booth besides his stall. 5 metres away. picks up the phone and puts in a coin. dails. we hear connecting tone
ZUL
Sam... ram ni.. macam mana?
SAM
(voice over phone)
Gua ok .. Lu dah siap ke belum sen? Kalau ada, dalam RM5,000 kita dah boleh proceed.
ZUL
Wa rasa dalam 2 minggu lagi boleh la bro. Tunggu gaji gua masuk dulu boleh?
SAM
(voice over phone)
Gaji…???
ZUL
Gaji despatch wa dengan duit niaga burger la bro…!
SAM
(voice over phone)
Bro… material gua dah siap. Kalau lu bayar deposit dulu pun cantik. Balance nanti kita talk bila keja dah settle.
ZUL
(smiles upon hearing the good news)
Ok Sam.. ngam la macam tu … terima kasih banyak… wa chow dulu...
EXT. ROADSIDE, PUBLIC PHONE– NIGHT
SC 3A cast in scene ZUL
location PHONE BOOTH
ram puts in a coin. dails. goes on to make another call. He looks hesitant initially but he dials the number anyway .we hear connecting tone.
ZUL
(fiddleing with the buttons)
Assalammualaikum mak. ram ni….
ZUL'S MOTHER
(voice over phone) intercut with (shot of floor... cigarette buds dropped.. dissolve to more cigarette buds.. dissolve to more and more...)
Waalaikumsalam … Hah ZUL .. Lama kau tak telefon mak ni. Kau tak sihat ke? Kerja macam mana? ….. blah blah blah blah ….. Ni mak nak cakap ni, cuba lah kau cari kerja yang elok2 sikit .. Ini kerja despatch, ke hulu ke hilir naik motor … tak tentu hujan ke, panas ke … hish bahaya ZUL.. mak risau kan kau nak oi… Balik lah kampong ni …Kerja dengan Pak Ngah kau .. tolong berniaga kat kedai runcit dia … dia pun takde anak lelaki nak menolong … Balik la ZUL… (she continues nagging.)
ZUL
(fiddleing with the buttons and he hangs up)
Yea lah mak… Ya mak … Ok mak…Kirim salam kat abah yea… Jaga diri mak… Assalammualaikum…
takes a deep breath and walks slowly back to his stall. Still reeling from hearing the good news, thanks to Sam...he walks back to his stall
THE JOB
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT
back at his stall.
A motorbike "kap chai" approaches stops in front of his stall. The motorcyclist removes his visor and smiles. It’s his colleague, Fendy
SC 4 cast in scene ZUL / FENDY
location STALL / KAP CAI
ZUL
(spots fendy )
Fendy!!
FENDY
(bikes pull up.. he lifts his helmet shade)
Zul, lu busy ke sok? Ada race kat tempat biasa. Amacam kita betting nak?
ZUL
(walks over to fendy )
Tak nak la ni... gila ke.. Esok wa ada hal. Tak boleh wei…
FENDY
(dissapointed with ram)
Banyak hal la lu … Bukan kerja pun esok…
ZUL
(esplaining)
Lagipun gua takde motor bro…
FENDY
(still on his bike... revving)
Itu la lu .. Ada motor lu jual … Nak buat album konon. Pakai motor opis la bro.
ZUL
(esplaining)
Mana boleh!
FENDY
(still on his bike... revving)
Bosan la lu Zul … Takpe, kitaorang gerak dulu … Chow!
Fendy shows snubing face and looks annoyed . revs up his bike and zooms off.... ram walks back to his stall.. Business resumes as usual. A productive evening, ZUL receives a stream of customers – in various colourful characters and personalities – at the stall. In his usual spot, Mat Rahmat sits still observing them
THE GIRL FRIEND
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT
SC 5 cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / WAWA
location STALL /
lock camera.. wide shot.. Wawa sits at a corner waiting for ram while he cooks for his patrons. dissoleve to patrons leaving.. dissolve to Wawa sits at a corner.dissolve to Wawa not at the stall...
SC 5A cast in scene ZUL
location PHONE BOOTH
ZUL calls Salwa, who he fondly calls Wawa, on her mobile and home but to no avail. He leaves a message to her housemate to return his call. ZUL returns to the stall.
SC 5B cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / WAWA / MAN IN CAR
location STALL / CAR
Minutes later, Wawa arrives at the stall. Accompanying her in the car is a man. She approaches ZUL at the stall.
ZUL
(slightly suprised)
Panjang umur Wawa. Abang baru teringat kan Wawa. Pegi mana abang call handphone, rumah tak dapat. Busy? Abang ada surprise nak bagi tau Wawa.
Wawa and ZUL exchange glances. ZUL looks confused and looks at Wawa
MAN IN CAR
(peering out from the window)
Yang, cepat sikit. Budak budak dah tunggu tu.
WAWA
(looks troubled)
Bang, nak cepat ni. Wawa minta maaf ye. Jaga diri abang baik baik....
ZUL
(lost and abbandoned)
....
Salwa walks off and leaves. ZUL looks at the car as it zooms off into the darkness
RAHMAT
(looks troubled)
Bro.. adik lu ke… Boleh tahan, itu balak dia ke? Ok tu, ada kereta… (he starts whistling)
SC 5C cast in scene ZUL / WAWA
location STALL
lock camera.. wide shot.. Wawa sits beside ram .. cross dissolve to ram alone..cross dissolve to ram still seated with ppl passing by.... dissolves to ram stands up and attends to the stall when a cumtomer arrives... fade to black...
THE TUNE
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT / RAIN
SC 6 cast in scene ZUL /
location STALL / GUITAR / FAKE RAIN
lock camera M.S. no patrons ram sits down. write his songs and stumms on his guitar... sings a song...
THE PEOPLE
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT
SC 7 cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / MAMEHA / BABY
location STALL
fade in lock camera.. wide shot.. ram sits sitting
* extras in scene Drag Queen 2- -Lara
BABY
(2 drag queen aproaches)
Abang …
ZUL
(looks up, surprised at the figure standing in front of his stall. There stands a beautiful drag queen. He smiles politely at her)
Tak nak la ni... gila ke.. Esok wa ada hal. Tak boleh wei…
MAMEHA
(peers over)
Burger ayam satu… Abang taruh sayur apa dalam burger?
ZUL
(esplaining)
Biasa la kak.. kobis, bawang, timun … boleh?
MAMEHA
(she frowns at the sound of kobis.... )
Kobis?. ...Tak nak lah, kobis bau kentut…!!!!
BABY
(she walks off in a haste together with Aresha)
Kobis?. ...Tak sesuai tau ...
RAHMAT
(Rahmat Man lets out a hearty laugh. ZUL turns red in embarrassment and looks at the weirdo)
Kentut….!!! Hahahaha…
SC 7A cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / REEZAL
location STALL
A young executive approaches the stall. Looking knackered, he politely orders his meal from ZUL
REEZAL
(walk over)
Burger ayam special satu. Hotdog tak nak sayur satu, burfer daging satu ye bang. Terima kasih.
REEZAL
(While waiting for his meal, Reezal’s handphone rings. He answers and starts talking to the person on the other end. The conversation touches on album sales, blah blah )
I understand but album you was just released two days ago, How can you possible expect the record label to lock in the sales today? I’m sorry but I’m afraid I don’t have the figures yet.
Annoyed, Reezal still maintains his calm and composure. He hangs up and smiles at ZUL
ZUL
(while wraping it up)
Problem kerja ke bang? Ni burger abang dah siap …
REEZAL
( he takes out his money and pays ZUL)
Biasa lah … artist baru macam tu lah … album baru keluar dua hari sibuk nau sales. Macam mana tu. Kalau Siti Nurhaliza lain cerita la
ZUL
(ZUL looks concerned)
Susah ke nak jual album sekarang bang?
REEZAL
(while keeping the change into his pocket)
Itu lah saya cakap. Kalau you bukan Siti tak payah lah berangan nak album you terjual laris. Industri muzik kita ni dah makin mengecil bukan berkembang. Kita kat sini bukan macam artistes kat Hollywood dik. Ok, terima kasih ek.
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT ladies ocassion 01
SC 7B cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / JOANNE / EMMA / LILI / BRIDGETTE
location STALL
* extras in stall Stephen chow - lookalike - Stephen BIKERS X 4
a customer - STPHEN CHOW lookalike potronising the stall.. ans 4 bikers pulls up...while they take of thier helmets..4 pub gals that goes pass the stall to work and home everday. ( 4 gals X 3 sexy wardrobe ) all freeze and look at the gals as they strolls pass
JOANNE
(drunk stubles on a curb..)
Ai ya......ma chao hai.... * cantonese
EMMA
(drunk)
hahhaaa...... * cantonese
LILI
(drunk)
pok sei lei a....ni he hen len duo ar?... * mandarin
BRIDGETTE
(drunk)
em doh... hai hou kau lan chat doh che....hahhaaa.... * cantonese
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT ladies ocassion 02
SC 7C cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / JOANNE / EMMA / LILI / BRIDGETTE / KELVIN
location STALL
the gals that walks pass ahmads stall to work and make a purchase
JOANNE
(drunk stubles on a curb..)
Hullo leng chai … kasi saya hotdog special…* cantonese acent
ZUL
(awakened from his dream upon hearing Joanne’s sweet voice. With her are her friends, Emma and Bridgette)
Ya leng loi… apa? Hotdog ke? Alamak, hotdog habis, burger ok tak?
LILI
(drunk)
Abis ar … betul punye ada???
the girls break into squeals of laughter
ZUL
(awakened)
Aargh … ek?
EMMA
(drunk)
Aiya …. ham saplah mereka!!!
BRIDGETTE
(drunk)
Kasi burger lah bang … special …
LILI
(drunk)
erm … special juga la… * mandarin
EMMA
(drunk)
smae same… special … * cantonese
the gals continue their conversation in Cantonese when a burly Chinese guy approaches them at the stall
KELVIN
(shouts)
Wei!!!! So free u all no need to work ar !!!!!*&&#$$#%^s
KELVIN
(looks over at the girls and talking in a dead serious tone. He turns to ZUL who is watching the lil’ drama with much interest)
Gua punye sudah siap ka?
ZUL
(he passes the burger over to Eric and collects the money and continues wrapping the “ladies of the night” burgers. The girls walk off from the stall)
Sudah boss * cantonese
KELVIN
(cursing in Cantonese to the girls and walks off)
Faster go in … got customers waiting …
SC 7D cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT
location STALL
ZUL sighs in relief, collects his guitar and starts playing again. Rahmat Man -- a mysterious man of sorts and a permanent fixture of sorts at his stall – looks at him. He utters no word, turns away and stares into the darkness of the night)
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT ladies ocassion 03
SC 7E cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / JOANNE CHIN
location STALL
one of pub gals that walks pass ahmads stall to work and make a purchase
JOANNE CHIN
(approaches)
boss... burger ayam satu..
ZUL
(looking thru his stocks)
Ok..
JOANNE CHIN
boss... tak mahu mayonise ya, tak mau sayur... chili saja
ZUL
( started cooking....)
Ok..... tak pena Nampak you.. you baru ke?.mana kawan.. sudah lama tak jumpa
JOANNE CHIN
(looks at her phone)
Baru saje kerja…kawan ar....sudah tak da kerja lo.... 2 minggu sudah...semua sudah jadi ye lai..... saya pun mahu berhenti lo.... susah la... minum tiap tiap hari... sumua uncle sana
ZUL
( continue cooking....)
oh.. sudah lama..apa tu ye lai?
JOANNE CHIN
ye lai..... itu orang sudah kawin jadi orang punya amoi la... orang kasih duit.. dia kasih siok la...
ZUL
( continue cooking....)
oh.. dah siap... tiga setengah moi...
JOANNE CHIN
(looks at her phone)
ok... thank you....
SC 7F cast in scene ZUL
location STALL / CHEAP MOBILE PHONE
joanne take her burger and walk off... ram cleans up the grill..ram's mobile phone rang...and he answers........Sam calls ZUL on his mobile to inform him of the album’s progress
SC 7G cast in scene ZUL
location STALL / CHEAP MOBILE PHONE
SAM
(voice in phone)
Wei bro…. lu busy ke?
ZUL
( lights a cigarette )
Biasa jer… Apa citer Sam?
SAM
(voice in phone)
Gini, studio gua dah book. Lu kasi deposit dulu … macam gua cakap hari tu, balance kita kaotim later, ok?
ZUL
( smiles )
Cantik bro. Bila boleh start masuk studio?
SAM
( laughs)
Sekarang pun boleh kalau lu boleh settle deposit.
hangs up and starts whistling to himself.
ZUL
( he breaks into a funny dance sequence and starts mimicking his idol, Amy Search… pheeeewwwiiittt!!)
Bro, gua nak jadi artist. Yea yea… Gua nak jadik artist … yeah yeah .. pheeeewwwiiittt!!
SC 7H cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / EDDIE PAK / JEHAN MISKIN
location STALL
* extras in stall PR manager 1 - fat father, fat mother, fat daughter
guess apearance of EDDIE PAK and JEHAN MISKIN
a fat family making a lot of orders, ram is buzy cooking thier order, focus on the fat parents face over looking ram cooking.. .
FAT FATHER / MOTHER / DAUGHTER
(impatience)
Mat burger.....bagi burger ayam special 2.... burger daging 1....Daging spacial 2... hot dog special 1...etc etc?
ZUL
( buzy cooing )
Okay boss, oaky boss...
Jehan appears and try to squeeze in between the fat couple and makes and order.. reverse angle.. sees jehan turning around and eddie pak appears.
JEHAN MISKIN
(squeeze over nad makes an oeder)
Boss... burger Special satu...
ZUL
( smiles )
Okay boss...
EDDIE PAK
( surprised )
Waa... Banyaknye order... mesti banyak untung si burger boy ni.....
JEHAN MISKIN
(acknowledges)
mesti kaya raye ni.. haha....
cut to wide shot...Jehan and Eddie pak both stands bihind the fat family waiting for thier burger... both smiles at each othe and starts chatting..fades to black..
SC 7I cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT
location STALL
* extras in stall badminton players
wide shot lock camera... a bunch of badminton player went buy burger..time plapse.....
THE RECORDING
SC 8 cast in scene ZUL / SAM / LOLOQ
location STAIRCASE
* extras in staircase walking up PR manager 1 - Boboy
EXT. RECORDIG STUDIO, STAIRS – NIGHT
While Sam meets Rahmats downstairs the recording studio...Loloq saunters pass...
SC 8A cast in scene ZUL / SAM / LOLOQ
location STAIRCASE
SAM
(pointing up)
Bro... you siap nak naik atas ..you ready?.. recording start dalam satu jam..
ZUL
( chills )
sudah ready…
Sam Spots Loloq walking towards them.......
SAM
(suprised and happy and waves)
Loloq…!! Lu apa bikin sini?
LOLOQ
( chills )
Standard la gua … Melawat kawasan.... (laughs ) Lu bikin apa ni?
LOLOQ
( Loloq looks at ZUL )
Ni artis baru lu ke? Bole pegi ke ni? Gua cakap sama lu bro, kalau lu takde the X-factor, lu tak payah tengok jauh-jauh la bro.
LOLOQ
( Loloq looks chill as himself )
blah blah blah blah … Tapi takpe, kalau lu confident rezeki tu ada kat mana mana kan? Ok?
ZUL
( smiles )
......
LOLOQ
( laughs and offers a handshake to ZUL and Sam)
Eh gua gerak dulu Sam.. Apa pun bak kata Kak Julie, good lux!!!
INT. RECORDIG STUDIO, RECORDING SUITE – NIGHT
SC 8B cast in scene ZUL
location RECORDING SUITE
in a dodgy dim-lit studio...ram seen putting on the headphone, back view of the sound engineer and sam looking over. sound engineer makes a thumbs up signal... fade to black
THE LONG WAIT
SC 9 cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT
location STALL / UNOPENED STALL / OPENED STALL
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT
ram carries on with his daily routine. cooking burgers. dissoleve to more cooking... dissolves to no more cooking.. dissolves to closing stall, dissolves to him waiting for business on stall.. dissolves to closing stall... dissolves to no business at all...fades to black
intercut in with scenes from the people and ram's Tune
THE PEOPLE. ladies ocassion 03
THE ALBUM
SC 10 cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / CD SELLER - AH HUAT
location STALL / CDS / POUCH / WALKIE TALKIE
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT
picks up his guitar and starts strumming his tune, oblivious to his surrounding. 2 VCD peddler approaches the stall. He talks into his walkie talkie
PIRATE CD SELLER - AH SENG
(talks in walkie talkie)
Woi…a seng hai tou.. hai mai tai fung? line tak clear … gua lepak dulu * cantonese
PIRATE CD SELLER - AH SENG
(approaches)
Lou sai..mai tai mou? * cantonese
ZUL
tak mau la... um koi....
PIRATE CD SELLER
(shows Amat his “merchandise”)
Tengok dulu boss...garantee clear punya...DVD tak gam ada CD.. ada feng tau.. ada rock...tak gam ada ini paling baru punya... banyak olang beli... ini rock punya.. Eh lu mau VCD ar? Baguih munye… hot-hot woh… baru kuar ni…
SC 10 CUA cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / CD SELLER - AH HUAT
location STALL / CDS / POUCH / WALKIE TALKIE
Pirate CD seller take out one from his bang and handed it over to ram and he runs through the stack of CDs and pauses as he spots one which looks familiar to him. He holds it up and asks Tim. His voice shakes in surprise
PIRATE CD SELLER - AH SENG
ini nagam ar?
ZUL
(try to keep his composure)
Mana lu dapat ni boss?
PIRATE CD SELLER - AH SENG
(looking around)
Hah … Itu manyak hot woh … Baru mari dari Indon.. Macam itu Seila on Seben, Peterpan, apa itu baru punye Sam…. Ahhh itu macam la… Kasi angkat la.. RM8 gua kasi lu …
ZUL takes the CD and stares into it. AH SENG receives a call from his “kaki”
PIRATE CD SELLER - AH SENG
(loosing his patience)
Line clear???? Ah ah ok ok … Amacam lu mau ka? Kasi angkat la .. Cincai RM5 … last one…
SC 10 CUB cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT / CD SELLER - AH HUAT
location STALL / CDS / POUCH / WALKIE TALKIE
ZUL opens the drawer and pays the CD SELLER - AH SENG for his own CD. both CD SELLER walks away in a haste. Disappointed, ZUL walks slowly the bench, with his head lowered looking at the CD. RAHMAT approaches him and looks at the CD he is holding
SC 10 A cast in scene ZUL / RAHMAT
location STALL / THE CD
ZUL
(try to keep his composure)
......
RAHMAT
(surprised)
Macam muka lu la bro? Sebijik macam lu. Eh lu ni????
ZUL
(Annoyed, ZUL passes the cD to RAHMAT. ZUL leaves the stall and makes his way to the phone booth. He dials .... we hear connecting tone... )
EXT. ROADSIDE, PUBLIC PHONE– NIGHT
SC 10 B cast in scene ZUL
location PHONE BOOTH
Assalammualaikum, mak. Mak sihat ke? ZUL tak boleh lama ni mak, takde duit. Ni mak tolong bagi no telefon Pak Ngah…
.. scene fades to black..
ONE WEEK LATER
EXT. ROADSIDE, BURGER STALL– NIGHT -
SC 11 cast in scene RAHMAT
location STALL / STEREO
camera fades in..wide shot of stall...to close up of cooking of burgers....
SC 11A cast in scene / RAHMAT / ERIC / WAIWOH / ANAND / CHEE /
location ROADSIDE / STALL / CAR / STEREO
cut to Car pulls over. all four exits the car and walke over to the stall...Rahmat is seen at the stall. This time around, he isn’t sitting but making burger instead. ZUL is nowhere in sight. In the background, his song is playing. Anand, Waiwoh and Chee approach the stall.
SC 11B cast in scene / RAHMAT / ERIC / WAIWOH / ANAND / CHEE /
location STALL / STEREO
WAIWOH
(approaches)
Waaa.. towkay baru ka? Eh…macam lagu ZUL tu.. * cantonese
He looks at his friend. They exchange glances and order their burger from Rahmat.
CHEE
No la.. this one sme artist sings one...
SC 11C cast in scene RAHMAT / ERIC / WAIWOH / ANAND / CHEE
location STALL
cut to a wide shot and tracks back.......showing the four guys ordering and eating at the stall having conversations......scene fades slowly to black as ZUL song play on....
THE END
Monday, April 14, 2008
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